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Dialogue Study #3 - Ten Traits of Faulty Dialogue Continued - Lesson Now Playing

Dialogue Study #3 - Ten Traits of Faulty Dialogue Continued

Mar 20, 2010

Traits 7 through 9:

#7: Talking Wallpaper

#8: Forced Exposition

#9: Malformation

 

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Dialogue Study #3 - Ten Traits of Faulty Dialogue Continued - Lesson Lesson Discussion

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KMTracy
KMTracy: Dialogue as ammunition
at Mar 26, 2010 - 8:11 AM
I really like this concept.  Sort of like words at twenty paces.
mysticpamela
mysticpamela: Ok...Done.
at Mar 22, 2010 - 4:27 PM
Where can we post our samples? I want to see some other peoples' scenes.
PennyJM
PennyJM: Exercise
at Mar 22, 2010 - 3:58 PM
I'd like to see some postings to clarify what you meant.
mysticpamela
mysticpamela: YES! Excerise!
at Mar 21, 2010 - 3:02 PM
Can we post them? What fun it would be to look over each other's scenes from the "My Litte Shicksa" example. Please, please, can we, please??
Oh, wait I gotta write mine...
Erikhengej
at Mar 21, 2010 - 2:25 AM
great as always!

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